I love it!
I love the concept! I'm not sure if it was a problem on my end or on yours, but a black bar kept obstructing my view of it. But I could still see it. Keep up the great work.
The sound was kinda bad, but can't blame you for that. However, I think you could have done a better job with the animation.
It's not bad at all. It lets us know that you have a lot of ability. If I could give you any advice that sticks, let it be that music needs to be dynamic. The first bit of the song isn't really going anywhere. Then it goes into half time (really great effect when implemented correctly), but then it goes back into the same thing as it opened with. Just try to make your music always be going somewhere. Listeners need to feel like they are being led somewhere instead of just standing in one place. No matter how beautiful scene is, it's easy to get tired of it unless you're always seeing more beautiful scenes.
You had it at first..
The chords that you've got going (along with the pleasant beats) were a really great start, but they never change, so it makes me want to hear more of the song, not just the same chords over and over again. Additionally, the bongo part could be a bit softer. It would be more balanced that way in addition to letting the song has some mystery to it. That sounds weird, i know, but the more you make people listen hard to something to pick it out, the better.
A Good Idea
You obviously had a great idea going into the making of this. It's a bit redundant after a while. It would go great as a backgroung loop on a video game menu or something. For some reason it makes me think of Metroid Prime. The ending is appropriate, which not many people do very well. Most of the time, endings are either too abrupt or too different from the rest of the song. This one, however, fits in very well. Good job.
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