Cool Concept.
Yeah, he's right about the kick every beat and hi-hat on the ands of the beats (the off beats). I assume you're still using FL? On the hi-hat track, try just mixing up the rhythm a little, even it's just clicking random squares. Oh, and where you have the hits at :50 and 1:00 ish, try making the synth follow the drum hits. That might sound cool.